I really enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed that his first thought was to call the police and slide past the thug rather then fight (I giggled inside because something was realistic for once) I didn't like the overly convenient zip line though. I think the characters could definitely use some flushing out and be given some more personality (if I knew how to do this I would tell you, but unfortunately I do not). I would be happy to voice act or at least attempt to (I'll PM you my email)