I love it!
Reviews for "Omega: Episode 1"
I think it has a lot of potential. At the beginning the frame rate looked a little off, but it looked like you fixed it later on. The female voice actor could have used some work and at times the animation was a little stiff, but overall I think it was very well done. The story seems pretty interesting, and there was some nice foreshadowing done by the professor at what I assume is a college. I do have one more problem though. You didn't really explain how the world works. You went about halfway and then you kind of stopped. For example when they were playing what I'll refer to as sport ball, that guy had super speed, but none of the other players did. So is it the suit or do some people have powers? But, you did do a lot of stuff right like that action, that was close to perfect. So I'll give you four and a half stars. Excited for the next episode! Keep up the good work.
JTmovie responds:
The sport is called Powerball and basically in this future a small percentage of the population has super powers, making it difficult for non powered players like Devin, to compete. The people having powers thing will be explored in upcoming episodes with how it relates to crime.
This episode was sort of a taste of those ideas, but mainly focused on how the overall story will play out with the past and the future. Thanks for the review and observations!
Very, very, very well done. Great build for the story. I can't wait to see how both it and you develop as art and artist.
Critique though: Your action scenes need a little smoother movement, and reactions when it comes to collisions of blows.
I really enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed that his first thought was to call the police and slide past the thug rather then fight (I giggled inside because something was realistic for once) I didn't like the overly convenient zip line though. I think the characters could definitely use some flushing out and be given some more personality (if I knew how to do this I would tell you, but unfortunately I do not). I would be happy to voice act or at least attempt to (I'll PM you my email)
I liked this, he became a superhero. How about doing another superhero origin story with a character that I will hopefully show to the artist of this story one day?