This loks like it could be on WB
Reviews for "Omega: Episode 1"
JTmovie responds:
Wow that means a lot coming from you, thanks!
This was AMAZING!! This has a very "DC Universe" to it and does the job wonderfully. The 2 years you spent on this really paid off! Love the art and even animation. Though the animation was a tad bit choppy at times and the outlines use too many "lines" but the everything else makes up for a small animation. You deserve the daily feature and I'm glad you got it. The story and action seem really interesting, so I hope you can do a lot thanks to this series.
JTmovie responds:
Hey thanks for all of your reviews and constructive critiques. Glad some of my art got noticed after this lol
I'm not sure what you mean by "the outlines use too many lines" though.
The animation is incredible, the story is overall great, but the fight scene needs some improvement. For example, when the last attacking cult member throws fireballs at Devin, Devin could've had more movement to his dodges (like sidestepping the fireballs, actually moving his legs instead of staying anchored in place, etc.) instead of just moving slightly left and right several times and ducking once. Asides from that, great job and I'm looking forward to watching this series.
JTmovie responds:
Hey thanks for the review and constructive suggestions. I will remember that for upcoming action sequences :)
Really great job creating something that feels like a DC animated web series, ya know? Ala Gotham Girls? Has a really nice vibe to it and I really like the animation. :)
try to talk more slowly and separate the words in each speak to be more easy for foreing public understand the story.