There are many typos, but i didn't write them down so sorry for that. It would be great if there was a link to go back to the decision without having to start the game all over, but beyond that, good work.
Reviews for "Beyond Darkness"
not going to modify your score because of it, but there were far too many spelling and grammar mistakes for me to even begin to list here. Vastly more than I ever expected, nearly every other line had something wrong. The honest problems with this are the overly repeated scenes, the lack of anything changing, the terribly repetitive music, and the sound of every letter being printed with the words that is not only distracting but extremely annoying. This isn't much in the way of a game but needs too much on the part of the user to just be in movies. If you want this to be a game, provide some choices for the player or something more for them to do but just press the same button to advance slow dialogue. The art was not bad, but just that. Not bad, not good, just a filler for a story. I would have really enjoyed reading the story had it been just that, but I also would have finished it in a couple of minutes instead of the time it took me to wait for scene after scene to load so I could read a sentence or two.
This game is interesting. I like the story development. The graphics are pretty good. The music is pretty good, but I feel there are areas in the game where the music doesn't fit. For instance the parts were people disappear. The music makes me feel like Agnes is happy that people around her are vanishing when she's actually freaking out about it. I was also expecting a little more player involvement in the game instead of watching the story unfold.
The art needs work. The writing is very long ,and drags in areas. This story did not make me cry at all. The medals work, and I earned them all.
Dark06Star responds:
Well it's a visual novel, so you should have expected it to have a lot of writing. But thanks for your feedback :P
There seems to be way too much clunky exposition in the narrative an the sound effect of the typing was very obnoxious. I also found the plot overall to be an interesting premise but the execution was somewhat sloppy and needs reorganized.