Not bad at all.
I actually liked the story of this visual novel, and the music was fitting and easy on the ears.
Some of the drawings were a bit rough around the edges, but you definitely have potential, and your story telling skills a pretty good.
A few of the things that detract from the experience is/are: the inability to scroll through the dialogue faster (even after holding down the "S" key), and after finishing the game there is no replay button or any other option to go to the main menu etc., so the player is forced to reload the entire game, and, as others have already stated, there are a number of misspellings (but fortunately it doesn't really affect the story telling).
Other than that, I enjoyed this experience, and I'd definitely like to see what you come out with down the road.
Keep up the good work.