I liked the game, the story started a bit slow (which might bore some players away), but it came well together in the end.
Also, it ran really smooth compared to your previous game.
I took half a star from my rating for the aliased graphics, the huge file size, again a lot typos (less than in your last game though) and because the backgrounds, characters and textbox don't really fit together.
Good work overall, I enjoyed it.