A good Visual Novel....
BUT it really needs some heavy fixes very badly...
The controls take too long to respond...
The Lag is horrible....
And the Art style...well I wish it could have been better. :(
Reviews for "Remember Death"
Wow:3,this game is interesting...Well except 4 the fact that you did the"Push 's' to continue,Hold it to make the text faster",it tires me by holding the button i don't really fell comfortable about to go on:(
I want it to be on click ,space,tab,or enter then its much better.So.....great game though^-^
Dafudge?! I didn't know there were other fans of Rabbit DOubt!
Dark06Star responds:
It's awesome :O
You know what, I read this at night yesterday, reached end of Chapter 2 and... had nightmares after that! Seriously! It just drills into depths of your mind! And I must say one thing: I read your stories before and you are a genius, a grandmaster of plot building. This thing is better than mixed "Saw" series and "Cube" series. A relation to these two movie series was my first thought.
It only needs some improvements:
1. Like many people mentioned the "S" needs to work fluently, sometimes I have to mash it numerous times before the dialogue proceeds;
2. Something creepy: looks like you forgot to draw Alice's right eye at the end of Chapter 2;
3. The text needs further polishing, because there are still lexical, grammar and punctuation errors.
I could help you with that, just let me know.
If I had to use one word to describe this visual novel, it would be "chilling."
I quickly got attached to the characters, which made it all the more cruel to watch them die over and over. (I should point out, however, that I'm the type who gets overly invested in video game storylines, so keep that in mind XD). I felt like I WAS Kotaro, desperate to save my friends from themselves. The premise is very creepy, and somewhat reminiscent of the Saw movies (which I, by the way, haven't seen. I just know the premise XD).
On a side note, this story reminds me a little bit of the game/anime Danganronpa, though I don't quite remember when that came out, so this might have come first.
I doubt you'll see this, Dark06Star, but if you do, you have a real talent for storytelling.