Ok mate, I have something to say:
My computer broke, so I played this game in my moms pc, which is the slowest machine in the world. Just so you know she buyed it in 2005 and it still have XP on it.
So, as you would imagine, the game lagged a lot. the S button didnt worked properly and everytime I had to reload the game it took ages. Some people wouldnt even play this game, well, visual novel, in those conditions. But i did, I will tell you why: Thats one of, if not the, best piece of storytelling I ever seen.
Your plot has got me to keep playing it even thought, because of my pc, it was lagging like hell. And thats what its fantastic about it. A story so good that no matter what gets in your way, you want to finish it.
With that being said, congratulations dude, what you have here is one of the best storytelling Newgrounds has to offer. Dont you ever dare to stop making other pice of arts like this one.
I look foward to playing the sequels of this, and your other games. I know I wont be disappointed.
Hails from Brazil,
Sincerely, your newest fan.