Well i love reading but the problem is that the dialogue sometimes stuck even if I press the S button.
Overall the game was good,keep it up
Reviews for "Remember Death"
Great game, amazing story but you have a few faults.
A. TOO slow of text speed, instant should be an option. down should be faster.
B. S needs to react better. i don't need to push it a BUNCH in order to move from text to text.
C. mini games are good, liked how the box one signified the story but it needs to be a little more polished, maybe more puzzle esc or more of a break from the story. both options have advantages.
D. respond, to every single person that comments on your games. Feedback = feedback. if someone tells you "hey, i like it but this is wrong" say "why?" or "i'll try and fix it" so it doesn't feel like all the feedback were TRYING to give, means nothing.
E. SO MANY TYPO's. Please, find a friend to JUST find typo's for you. At least 30 were here.
Great game, just, you need to improve and then gain experience. those don't always come together.
Dark06Star responds:
hey there. I know this game has a lot of mistakes.. but the sad thing is I can't really fix them now. The laptop I used to work on this game broke, so most of the files are gone. (If I make a remake of it I'll fix everything.)
I do read others comments. and I did improve myself in my other games... I guess I really rushed Remember Death when I made it.
This was a rather fun game what I really liked was the story element you bring into this some added fun indeed, You have a great sense of adventure and story telling and you bring that out about in this lil game
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WOAH GeorgeStevens comment is LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG!! the controls for the text are slow so it's quite an annoyance :( I get that the s button helps and things but it's still so slow, u should also try some background music 4m the start. I get that it's a different type of game but seeing as it still has a visual novel feel to it I recommend you check out some of pacthesis' games like 'memory days sim date' at least 4 the way the dialogue reads and the mechanics of how players of her game easily continue on to the next bit and 4 the background music.
The backgrounds of this are pretty i'm not going to fuss ovr the character design bcoz everyone has their own style and this game is more story centred anyway Besides i like riku and nana's look- especially riku. Alice's arm is WEIRD.
Improve basic game mechanics and we'll be getting somewhere.
A fascinating novel. But the bigger concept ruins the storyline for me. While I made the right choice in the end, I did so for selfish reasons. No way am I going to save some sick, twisted, psychopath like that one. Well, an individual who will in the future become such a person. Nope! Not doing it.
Had to take point off because the early chapters are just far too long and the controls horribly unresponsive.