I absolutely loved your video Brewster. I loved the pun at the end of the video, but the dialog could have been a bit stronger, All in all, I loved every second. FYI to all; A Milk man is like a Paper Boy, But instead of delivering Newspapers, Milk man delivers milk. Get the point?
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Brewster responds:
got it!
It tried really hard to be funny but just wasn't. Work on the voice volume too, it goes from too loud to too quiet. I don't think it's original either, feel like it's copying other artist's styles but they are actually funny.
Brewster responds:
Well I was trying to be funny, youre right about that. Wish you wouldve expanded on who you feel like I'm copying, that would be nice to know
Desperately needed more boobs and jokes that are funny.
Brewster responds:
You're scum. Die.
the dialog was fine though slightly sluggish as points. the main problem I have with this is the lack of contrast in colors.
Brewster responds:
Hm, ok. I wanted the main contrast to be the red and the blue of the characters, but I have a feeling you're talking about how all the colors are so desaturated. I don't really know why I chose to do it that way but I don't think it looks too bad. Everyone's got their opinions I 'spose.
not funny
Brewster responds:
Can't win 'em all! (And then I shrug at the camera and it does one of those old cartoon black circle spotlight things that closes in on my face but then it stops so you can only see my head and then i do a wink and you hear a little ding sound and then the circle closes completely.)