Cute little cartoon! It was funny & charming enough to be enjoyable, but the voice acting needed a bit more "oomph" for it to have been convincing. For instance, the kid's sarcasm didn't quite come through too well and therefore hurt the joke of his snarky behaviour.
The visual style fit (or rather set) the tone nicely, and the facial expressions were great. And the concept was a funny one. Good job!
Thanks! I get what you mean about the way the kid talks. When I was recording I hadn't really figured out of I wanted him to a smartass about it, or if those were the actual ingredients and he was being genuine. I hope people got that he was, in fact, being sarcastic, but yeah I kinda started straying away from the sarcasm with some of the ingredients.
I thought it was pretty funny! The only thing that bothered me was the lack of music. Maybe you like it that way? I mean, it's great as is. But just a little chip tune in the bq, and then some stuff to go with the kid's crazy recipe...etc. I think it would be a nice touch!
BLAH BLAH anyway, nice job!
I do like it that way, but you're also on to something with what you've got there. Thanks for the review!
Lol I actually laughed at it. Especially at the blue guy. For the animation, could have more I guess. The voice acting's quality and itself could have been better since it's pretty much what drives the whole clip. Overall, it was a pretty good short, really clean.
Thanks. You're right that the animation could've been better. The only reason it's in that quick and bouncy style is because it was quick to draw and I originally planned to finish this entire cartoon in a day. Took about a month though.
I had troubles with the sound.
Wont happen again.
Nice. I like the style. It wasn't too funny, but I liked it.
Well thanks for sharing