Damn i hate those over critical persons! Animations and voice acting are ok and the angry kid face made me laugh. Good job dude!
Reviews for "Taking a Stand"
Brewster responds:
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The art style is really nice and so are the colors. And the animation is solid. Good job.
Brewster responds:
Thanks man
I thought it was OK. I really liked the art style and the animation was smooth. Those are the things I liked most about this.
But I felt the whole thing in general was just kinda scatterbrained (scat·ter·brained: Disorganized and lacking in concentration) in that the pacing was kinda unnatural. I'm not sure how to exactly put it, but the INSTANT the milk man finished his tantrum, he started cooling down. When the kid was listing the ingredients, he would go from that pondering and unsure tone (e.g. "Umm...milk?") to fast paced and excited and then back to unsure. And then for some unknown reason the milk man makes a pun, which are lighthearted in essence, but the kid demands him to get away in a serious tone. Maybe this might be the humor in it, but I didn't find it that funny.
I did think the ingredients themselves were funny though, and I think the voicing was decent even though the mic was a little fuzzy; you could pretty clearly hear the mic fuzz when the voices turned on.
Brewster responds:
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. A lot of people have been saying the audio quality wasn't good, but it sounded ok on my end, so I'm gonna have to find a way to make it sound better. maybe new headphones or something.
As for the pacing of the jokes, I don't really know what to say. I guess it's just a matter of taste in humor. You explained the pacing in way where you're saying why it's not funny, where as I would explain it the exact same way, but to try and say why it IS funny. It's pretty interesting how our opinion on that part of the movie are polar opposite, but when it comes to the list of ingredients, we agree. Pretty cool stuff.
Haha, "Big Bang Theory season 2", funny stuff.
Brewster responds:
Thenks
The animation and voice acting was well done. However, it's a very odd story, and the humor was lost towards the end. But all in all, not bad.
Brewster responds:
I agree its very strange but I actually thought the end was where it shined in the humor department. Different strokes for different folks I s'pose.