cosmetically i had some problems with this game and it crashed after an hour of play. i don't want to have to go back though all that to see the ending so i have to say this was cool. i think taking out or changing the text tone would help, add some more music and a save feature could be an idea i would like to see the background and foreground meld smother then they do but that is nothing more then a nitpick. all and all i had fun. thank you.