Hey, this is fantastic. The animation is was very well done, within that short amount of time. There is one thing though. You're probably going to hate me for this, since most do think I'm a bit prude on the subject. The font "Pulse Sans," by Eric Mynahan was used as the title, but you did not credit him, although you credited other sources for materials. The other issue is that you probably shouldn't have used the typeface, anyways. It spoiled the story quite a bit. I really would just recommend handwritten text. This would help unify the entire piece.