Your skills with Flash are top-notch, and your use of different camera-switching (for lack of a better term) effects was both apt and understandable, which is kind of hard to do, so kudos there. But consider finding someone else to write your scripts, because this thing seemed directionless basically the whole way through. Tributes to fond memories are fine, and it looked like you were trying to tell a story with them, but the points weren't really linked at all. But man, if you can get that down, and create something with some meaning or wholeness? The internet will never be the same.