honestly, i dont usually comment. but i want to say kudos to the person who came up with this story consept. the only real bad part was in the graininess of the male voice (but that was a technical problem) and the animation of the girl running was static, but other than that, it was all amazing, good job
Reviews for "Out of Order 1"
kmau responds:
I'll definitely be more generous with my inbetweening time in the next part.
Like the animation, jokes, MUSIC. The story is interesting! Good work all! I can't just wait for the next episode. Jazzzzzyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!
It was pretty tight, the only thing i didnt like was the girl's voice acting and when the girl was running, it looks like a lag
lol i liked how the car looked like 3d animation and the girl was limited to like 5 frame animations! and bro looks like shnitzel from that show chowder. i'm not a fan of the plot and i think it moves pretty slow for what it iz but i had a lot of fun with it.
kmau responds:
Haha I felt that particular scene had a big contrast in fluidity too.
BEST FUCKING THING I'VE SEEN IN AGES!
This series is going to be amazing. I mean, it's going to be brilliant. I'm not even going to try to criticize. 4.5 stars because there is some room for improvement.
Only one thing. I beg of you, please PLEASE see this series through to it's end. I've seen so many amazing pieces of work start here on Newgrounds, filled with amazing talent, and every time they fizzle out before the end. really. I mean it. I've never seen a single serious series with a strong storyline last here. they all just... stop. Usually the creator moves on, gets to a new stage in their life, and no longer feels the need to finish them.
Please, I beg you, finish this.