Reviews for Epexsus Episode 1

[NCH]

for a one man job and at the age of 18 I think you are going off at a good start.
sure it has lots of its flaws and inconsistency but it brings me back at my age when I also started out animation and everything just works.

but as you progress and get better, its gonna be much harder to pull off a epic 15min animation by yourself when you want every scene to be at its best quality. ;)

take the critics that review your work with some thought. you are going somewhere with this and keep at it.
I've not much to critic as most of the critics have already pointed out the flaws and I would be repeating myself, so heres my encouragement post and keep carrying on your passion to your craft.

[subluke]

AAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! MY INSIDES!!! I NEED THOSE!!!!

[glimpee]

Good directing and voice acting. Not so good animating, and OK writing, just need to work on continuity and logic

Other than that good job I guess

[gleefan223]

i was like whoa makota have his father lost when he was 7 like batman coz batman lost his dad when he was a child

[SeethingWOund]

This is pretty cool! I can see this going somewhere. There are so many things you can add to this story and so many possibilities as to where the story will go, my head is practically swarming with ideas as to who the hell that masked guy is. Is he and old enemy of Makota's dad from the war age? Or is he a bitter rival come to take revenge on his dad for taking the one he loves and having Makota with her? Or is he an old FRIEND of Makota's dad that has turned evil and is working for soebody that is higher than him? Plus if you think back he didn't kill Makota, he simply tried to walk away with him (In Makota's dream/flashback), whats going on there?. There's just so many possibilities! Im also curious to find out who had escaped that attack the maked guy made on the village.
It has great potential and I even found it pretty comedic. It was funny when Makota's brother threw the spear and it landed in the monsters back XD the scenes between the monster and him were halarious! All in all this is a great idea and it should be continued! Or I will find you. e_e
IM kidding. 6/5 stars because this desrved an extra star. :)
Oh and you might also want to make this into something you can pause I had to go pee in the middle so I had to hold it or bring my laptop in the bathroom with me. I held it. O-O and a scene selection would be cool! Keep up the good work! :D