"Captured Magic"
Dam I am new on this site but I've seen a lot of flash too, The music and your visual story was awesome it depicted an amazing fantasy story.
- music: 9
- Style: 4
- Animation: 6 (not because it was bad but just too simple for my opinion but still excellent job)
Really well done mate, hope to see some more from you.
Wow!
Thank god the green lantern saved the day! lol but the flash was alirght!
This was cute
But it kinda dragged a bit.. I know it's a lot of work to create scenes, but there was just too little going on for most of the clip. Like, you're staring at one frozen scene, maybe zooming in or out a little bit, but just waiting for something to happen next for a bit too long.
The music honestly seems much more suited to something fantasy based, while the story here seems to be superhero origin, you know?
The artwork is a bit simplistic, but combined with the story looks like it could be an intro to a game.
Hope this was helpful, and I do hope you keep working on new stuff.
Thank you for the review! I had the same feeling too when I finished it. I should have put more time into getting the timing right with some of the scenes. As for the art, yes, it is a tad on the simple side, maybe someday I'll learn to draw better in a more efficient manner. But yeah, I loads of time to improve and every critical review is helpful to me in some way so thank you again! :]
Great animation but...
I loved it... The animation is good not fantastic but still really cute and fun to watch but the bad points is the guardian ? a flame ? human getting green??? Green lantern !!Sorry if you did not see the movie but thats almost the same base it would have been totally different if you have choose ice and blue suit but u choosed flame and green suit !!! Oh and the flame choosing the hero because he's strong brave and have no fear... So yeah great animation really cute but nothing more nothing NEW. Maybe im hard in my comment but you have talent so create something never seem before and you can be sure you will get only 10/10 from me.
Great job, but...
Make no mistake, this was an excellent flash, but, there are a couple things you could improve on. First off, and most importantly I think, is that this flash relies heavily on the music, of which you did not compose. I'd argue that many of these great reviews can be attributed to Ms. Stirling's excellent musical piece, of which I love; with that in mind, I doubt this flash would have made it to where it is without the soundtrack you chose. Now, this was a pretty good flash, and leaning on someone else's work is acceptable, but, is it not undesirable for you as an artist to have your work praised because you attached your work to something good made by another? If we ignore the music, the plot is a little tired and tried out, furthermore, the text that appears is a bit cheesy. I recommend you work on your dialogues.
I totally understand what your saying, and your right. If it wasn't for Lindsey's amazing music, this would be mediocre. I'm happy for all the great review this has been getting, but honestly, it should be more towards Lindsey, not me. But oh well...
Maybe someday, I'll be able to be great at what I do! One step at a time though :]