A classic Halloween tale
It was still a good one, some what predictable and the ending was a nice touch.
Reviews for "Jack's Halloween Treats"
Thats cute.
Yeah, like other reviews said, kind of obvious but very interesting due to your twisty twists. Love it.
and i say its cute b/c he doesn't mess with the little girl at the end :) only the kids who did something bad:
1) kid stole candy from the guy
2) kid tried to act like he wasn't afraid of anything
3) kid was being friggin annoyingly inpatient -.-" LOL
i love it tho :) really well done.
Pretty good, but obvious.
I felt i had an idea of what was gonna happen throughout. But even so, you threw in enough twists that i found enjoyable. And nice idea with that candle=each kids' lives thing. Pretty new.
those kids are retarted
if some fucked up dude invided me into his house i whould be like hell no but but that was awsome.
Very nice!
I think this might be my favorite Halloween submission so far this year. I have little doubt you shall win Daily Feature. I guess it's true that black cats are satanic. I would have to say that the best and scariest part of this was when you saw the pumpkin guy's silhouette at the end. You wondered what he looked like under that head, but it revealed it WAS his head! The artwork is fantastic and it seems like a nice standard Halloween story.
The way the guy doesn't talk makes him even scarier. I guess that's why so many horror movies feature villians who are like that, huh? I sincerely thought at least the girl was going to get out of there and wasn't expecting there to be the law of mirrors or whatever at the end. I hope you have a Happy Halloween! I think we all know people who act like this in our teenage years.