Wow
This is exactly why I can't progress in Pokemon.
Reviews for "Pokemon Bash"
OnionsXD responds:
You know you need to use the squirtle bottle right? lol
Yep
The animation was really stiff and the humor felt like a half ass attempt to make me pity laugh. I'm not leaving a review because I know Spazkid, I'm leaving a review because this really was terrible.
OnionsXD responds:
Well instead of blatantly saying it sucks. Why not pinpoint exactly what made it so terrible to you?
POKEMON JOEK
not original, not funny, not good animation nor art. work on your stuff plz.
OnionsXD responds:
Allright. How do you propose I could improve? The more detailed your explanation the better I can know what to work on.
good animation
but the story is too basic, you had a gold mine of jokes round that and you letted it go
Not bad.
The joke is overused though. "Tell my wife and children i love them...etc." also "why why would you do this to me." I've seen many parodies like this. It was however somehow different and stood out. I really liked the animation style, and your humor isn't bad. Keep at it and you'll be really popular on newgrounds someday. Goodluck!
~JellyDraft
OnionsXD responds:
I haven't seen any parodies with those kind of jokes. o_o
However, after I made this animation I realized that some popular internet comic artist had made a 1 pg comic similiar to this. I was shocked.
I'm not sure how my animation would stand out. but that's great to hear! Thanks for the review! :D