Not funny.
You need to work on your punch lines.
Because there was none.
Reviews for "Pokemon Bash"
OnionsXD responds:
I'm still working on humor. So yeh, I'm gonna work harder on my punch lines from now on.
lol
not bad, actually enjoyed the song at the end more than the video though lol
OnionsXD responds:
I can see why. Xkore has got some sick music. O:
Stupid trainer...
You can't catch them if they faint
OnionsXD responds:
That's when you can catch them! I think maybe you meant to say when they die? :D
XD!!!!!!!!
totally through me for a loop. i was convinced heed zoom in on the baby and with his last dieing breath wispier....
"Rosebud"
great punch line with the pokey ball at the end as well
OnionsXD responds:
Haha thanks! That's great to hear! :DD
Great!!! Cruelty make thing funny!
Short but you know what? I loved it!!! Maybe cuz i though the same at this point of the game lets cut that sudowoodo!!! Cant? Why? Put water on it? XD Just cut it off !!! No really this was a great idea you should do more. Cruelty make thing funny! 7/10 because it was short and the gag could have been more funny with more construction around it.
OnionsXD responds:
Hey thanks for the review!!
I didn't make it longer because, I didn't want to spend to much time on a project that wasn't original. I'll be spending more time on my own animation series though. :D