Pretty good
This movie can use a bit of color, but still the story is the best i've seen.
Reviews for "The Old Ash Tree"
This could of been better, but not bad!
The whispering was a little too scratchy to understand so it kinda of lost me and I could not read the words during the video and had to read the author's comments thanks btw haha. This was a good creepypasta and the problems weren't too bad needed a little improvement in my opinion
Nice work though!
Certainly interesting, but it could be improved.
I feel like the doubled vocals were distracting, and didn't heighten the 'creepy' atmosphere. The whispering wasn't necessary and would have been just as or more effective if it were a strong female voice. I liked the poem a lot, and think it was quite well done.
I would have liked it more if it rhymed, but it's better to forego the rhyming scheme if it lessens the quality of the poetry.
Scary
It scared me. A lot. But I don't understand it. I don't understand what is the point of the story (or is there a point). I think it was made just to be scary, without rhyme or reason, but that is just my opinion. Animation was limited. It felt like watching a motion comic. Voice was hard to understand, but it is actually scarier that way. Still, I found it hard to read some of the subtitles. The font was...confusing, for the lack of better word. I liked it, but I didn't love it, so, with that said, 3/5 and 7/10.
-____-
File -> Publish Settings -> Flash -> Audio Stream - Set -> 16kbps -> 128 kbps