Nicely executed
I thought that was very well done the way you relayed the story. Good job
Reviews for "The Old Ash Tree"
Awesome
Been watin a long time for a new flash from you.
It was good,except the suspense were rendered useless and to be quite frank it still lacks an element that could have shaken my whole being.Of which some of your previous flash had.But it was still very creepy (and to admit I was expecting something surprising).
I will agree with the most guys that this flash have a potential to become a hollywood movie.But if that happens this will become more creepy,as a matter of fact it may even beat "are you afraid in the dark".
But over all it was still awesome,can we hope some more animation from your crooked mind?
If I put this in one word: Awsome!
Such a shame
I barely get to see animated narratives like this, they are way too rare. Thank you for this wonderful piece of art! The shame is that people don't understand it. It probably too poetic for their untrained eyes. The story does what it is intended to do, it leaves the audience with a thought. Unfortunately, some people just think "wtf did I just watch?"
I love this, but the audio quality is very bad. Whispering helps the atmosphere, but it also makes it suffer from illegibility. I had to read the description to understand it. It would have been nice to be able to hear it. Other than that though, there are no complaints. This was very worth watching and reviewing.
Animation done smoothly, Thanks for the volume tip, Story has a great macabe air about and I enjoyed the "peom".
Certainly interesting, but it could be improved.
I feel like the doubled vocals were distracting, and didn't heighten the 'creepy' atmosphere. The whispering wasn't necessary and would have been just as or more effective if it were a strong female voice. I liked the poem a lot, and think it was quite well done.
I would have liked it more if it rhymed, but it's better to forego the rhyming scheme if it lessens the quality of the poetry.