This was great
I love how fluid the animation is, the sound quality could use a great deal of work but the voice acting was good as well.
I always love these project works, always top notch compared to most flashes made just for the fun of it.
It wasn't very funny but that's just my opinion, and I don't care about stories, you can always get a new writer but great animation comes around as much as a winning lottery ticket.
Try to improve,never take yourself too seriously, don't be afraid to try new things at the gamble of your reputation, and you'll go far.