Reviews for Cheromanchequois

[Luis]

Great results

I remember seeing this while it was still partly storyboarded, its good to see the final product after all this time.

Your voice actress really sells the neurotic nature of Lolita well. The pacing was comfortable and it was a great little short.

I found the clip of the storm clouds to feel a bit out of place. I think the fact that it was real footage made it feel like it was done to save time as opposed to something deliberate. That is my only gripe with it really, just felt a little detached from the other artwork and didnt feel necessary to approach it that way. Lookin forward to your future stuff.

[castratedchawawa1245]

Excellent work everyone

I saw no faults with this animation. It was fluid, entertaining, and the sound was great. I didn't find it very funny, but then again I don't find many things funny since I'm a pretty serious guy. Anyways, keep up the animations. I'd love to see more of these characters, especially the old native grandfather.

[Lucido23]

funny...

i like so funny and the animations is really good...

[NaKriege]

Good but...

Ok I get that Lolita is a hippie idiot, but she has a significant amount of Native American in her and an obvious interest in the culture. Yet instead of I don't know maybe teaching her about her heritage and cultural background and how to to properly embrace it the grandfather straight up tells her she's not Native American enough and ignores and belittles her. If he took the time to instruct her maybe she wouldn't be so ignorant about the culture.

Yeah I understand that this is supposed to be funny and I'm probably gonna get blasted for taking ti too seriously, but in the process of bashing overzealous hippie idiots it also, whether intentionally or unintentionally, sends the message that people of mixed ethnic backgrounds don't have any place within their multiple cultures.

My girlfriend is half black and was completely rejected by her white grandparents so maybe I am just a bit more sensitive to this issue than most.

That said the animation and voice acting were top notch. I base my rating off of these.

[demonichedgehog999]

Great work

I personally didn't find it that funny but I'm in animation classes myself and can really appreciate the work that went into this. As an animator, you're incredible. The idea is new and fresh like I've never seen before but the humor in itself was lacking.