Great results
I remember seeing this while it was still partly storyboarded, its good to see the final product after all this time.
Your voice actress really sells the neurotic nature of Lolita well. The pacing was comfortable and it was a great little short.
I found the clip of the storm clouds to feel a bit out of place. I think the fact that it was real footage made it feel like it was done to save time as opposed to something deliberate. That is my only gripe with it really, just felt a little detached from the other artwork and didnt feel necessary to approach it that way. Lookin forward to your future stuff.