Meh
You're art has come on so far from your original cartoons, and you deserve a lot of credit for that, but this wan't very funny (though of course humor is a subjective quality) and to me just felt rather forced.
Meh
You're art has come on so far from your original cartoons, and you deserve a lot of credit for that, but this wan't very funny (though of course humor is a subjective quality) and to me just felt rather forced.
Didnt like it
you need to stop riding off your popularity so much and focus on what essiental made you famous. witty ridiculousness with comedic timing and flow. I didntlaugh at any of these "jokes" - atleast the character was avidly animated. So
script =1/5
Animation= 4/5
Try making shit non video game related - like Mr literal . You have enough VG related toons by now bra
2 Shoulders up!
For egorapter, this is below his standards. On the plus side, nice animation.
are you even trying to make us laugh anymore?
.....sigh, this was a huge disappointment for me, honestly it was, this isn't funny at all, let me sum up what i saw here, i just saw you, suggesting crappy games, and thats pretty much it
one thing that is good about this submission is quality, which you never fail to deliver, however it seems that your flawless animation comes at a price, and the price is humor
5/5 for animation
0/5 for humor
i found nothing funny about it, and probably people will find this review useless because I'm being honest and not afraid to tell the truth, most people are blinded by the artists popularity to actually give proper constructive criticism, w/out criticism the author wont find out where to improve himself, so be honest in a good way
p.s. egoraptor you used to be my idol with your awesomeness, but now i kinda have a new idol, the manwhore fernando :( sorry dude
EHH not really funny..
I m a big fan of you but most of the humor was so bland and poorly delivered that it wasnt even funny, theres little I can say to this cartton except that its not funny. But well animated as always.