well...
It was very well animated, as well as the music was very well composed BUT, i digress, im not really one for the whole "make a scene with no real interpretation" story. It looked fantastic though, and thats usually enough for good rating these days lol. Look at avatar, James just made dances with wolves with blue people and made it look amazing and made the highest grossing film. Good job though, i hope to see other works you do, maybe with a better story?