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Reviews for "VentureBros FanFiction"

T'was Alright

I'm fourteen so I might not be great at commenting on stuff, but this was alright, although The Monarch didnt sound like The Monarch, which is a disapointment, due to everyone else sounding great.

The audio sounded fuzzy aswell.

writing was good though, and this did remind me of the show, but didnt 24 die when they had the treehouse? Oh well, maybe I'm just making up criticism now.

Overall though, nice work, and a great VB parody. 9/10 5/5

smirkstudios responds:

Yes, after 24 dies and 21 gets all buff, he makes a tree house. Thanks for noticing a tree house at all, though, since it is indeed the crappiest drawing in the entire short. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the votes!

PS - Yes, you're just making up criticism now. Of course I don't have anything wrong with that, but at 14 years old with no content to compare with, it is clear to me that you don't know how hard doing it all yourself really is. I was you at one point, can you believe that?

Thanks again for the review, hope to hear more from you in the future!

**EDIT** Wow, thanks for favoriting my Flash, as well!

Good animation!

Now, if you were to get them all to die....That would be awesome. (its their time)

smirkstudios responds:

Almost, I believe 2 more seasons and it's all over!

it was pretty good

the voices of the henchmen for pretty spot on. the monarch of course is alittle harder to mimick. he has sort of a neighsaly (improperly spelled) sound to it. sort of like rebecca black's singing.

smirkstudios responds:

Thanks, man! I didn't know if I would be able to do the Monarch, and when I did the takes I was really upset about how I had thought they came out, but it is at least passable as a Monarch-esque voice :P Drawing him was pretty fun, though :D

Loved it!

Man, I remember BBQ twists...they were badass! I really want some now! Also, great flash! It made me laugh because it reminds me of the henchmen a lot. The one complaint I have is the sound was a little piercing, but I guess the Monarch is supposed to sound that way. :P

smirkstudios responds:

Thanks! The Monarch is supposed to sound piercing, but if it's the static and peaking issues, then yes, I could use some quality adjusting in my audio work. Thanks again!

Wow, man...

You pretty much got their voices spot the fuck on. High Five!

smirkstudios responds:

Thanks! High Five Back!