Pretty good bro!
I have to agree, Monarch was a little off, but besides that, AWESOME WORK!
Reviews for "VentureBros FanFiction"
smirkstudios responds:
Right, and all these voices coming from one guy? Get real, man, I'm just messing around!!! LOL Thanks, brother for the review!
YESSSSS
There is no reason not to love this cartoon.
smirkstudios responds:
That's right. I dare anyone else to make a better one, not that they can't.
T'was Alright
I'm fourteen so I might not be great at commenting on stuff, but this was alright, although The Monarch didnt sound like The Monarch, which is a disapointment, due to everyone else sounding great.
The audio sounded fuzzy aswell.
writing was good though, and this did remind me of the show, but didnt 24 die when they had the treehouse? Oh well, maybe I'm just making up criticism now.
Overall though, nice work, and a great VB parody. 9/10 5/5
smirkstudios responds:
Yes, after 24 dies and 21 gets all buff, he makes a tree house. Thanks for noticing a tree house at all, though, since it is indeed the crappiest drawing in the entire short. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the votes!
PS - Yes, you're just making up criticism now. Of course I don't have anything wrong with that, but at 14 years old with no content to compare with, it is clear to me that you don't know how hard doing it all yourself really is. I was you at one point, can you believe that?
Thanks again for the review, hope to hear more from you in the future!
**EDIT** Wow, thanks for favoriting my Flash, as well!
Fantastic work dude.
Of course the whole reason to watch this is for the incredible impressions, but with super clean artwork and animation on top of that it's a real treat of a video. Really great job.
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks, man! This is me running with what you've given me. The amazing Jeff Short of the Sketched series (and soon much more!!!) Big step for me.
**EDIT**
LOL thanks for the 10, even though I only used to give out nines when we met LOL Let it be known that I still always gave you 5's...
AWESOME!!!
You nailed the characters and for 3 voices that are all completely different, you did a great job matching them. This is awesome!! TY Dorb
smirkstudios responds:
Thanks, Chad!! Way to know what you're talking about.