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Reviews for "VentureBros FanFiction"

T'was Alright

I'm fourteen so I might not be great at commenting on stuff, but this was alright, although The Monarch didnt sound like The Monarch, which is a disapointment, due to everyone else sounding great.

The audio sounded fuzzy aswell.

writing was good though, and this did remind me of the show, but didnt 24 die when they had the treehouse? Oh well, maybe I'm just making up criticism now.

Overall though, nice work, and a great VB parody. 9/10 5/5

smirkstudios responds:

Yes, after 24 dies and 21 gets all buff, he makes a tree house. Thanks for noticing a tree house at all, though, since it is indeed the crappiest drawing in the entire short. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the votes!

PS - Yes, you're just making up criticism now. Of course I don't have anything wrong with that, but at 14 years old with no content to compare with, it is clear to me that you don't know how hard doing it all yourself really is. I was you at one point, can you believe that?

Thanks again for the review, hope to hear more from you in the future!

**EDIT** Wow, thanks for favoriting my Flash, as well!

Pretty good bro!

I have to agree, Monarch was a little off, but besides that, AWESOME WORK!

smirkstudios responds:

Right, and all these voices coming from one guy? Get real, man, I'm just messing around!!! LOL Thanks, brother for the review!

Loved it!

Man, I remember BBQ twists...they were badass! I really want some now! Also, great flash! It made me laugh because it reminds me of the henchmen a lot. The one complaint I have is the sound was a little piercing, but I guess the Monarch is supposed to sound that way. :P

smirkstudios responds:

Thanks! The Monarch is supposed to sound piercing, but if it's the static and peaking issues, then yes, I could use some quality adjusting in my audio work. Thanks again!

Good

You captured the humor of venture brothers very well (who even says that?) Definitly a nice little treat to tide all fans over till the next season comes out. Very nice job :D

smirkstudios responds:

Cool, thanks!

Classic 21 and 24 banter

The banter between 21 and 24 was definitely my favorite. It was perfect and the voices were pretty spot-on as well. I think this is the first VB flash I've ever seen and I was definitely pleased. Excellente.

smirkstudios responds:

Incidentally, I wonder if this IS the first VB Flash... Go Team Venture!