Constructive critiscm?
Is this your first attempt at a flash game? I mean, all credit to you for spending the time on working on it. Evidently, maybe the animation needs work, and the story needs to be made more interesting, but I reckon it isn't horrifically bad. From an artistic perspective, the whole retro look doesn't go with what your I think you're trying to get across. On a postive note, I quite liked the music.