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Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 3"

This one was pretty awesome

Animation: 9/10
The reason I rated it 9 out of 10 is for the fact that while it's actually pretty good, there's still a few flaws (mostly just the lipsyncing thing) but everything else is awesome, not sure if you did something different, or if you did what you were doing better.
Audio: 9/10
Aside from microphone quality on some characters, it's all good.
Humor/Story: 10/10
This is where the episode shines, I was laughing my ass off the entire time.

Overall: 9/10
Very minor flaws, but it other than them, you're getting awesome at this.

Woohoo WHOOKOS!

Once again, you've depicted the school life of the outside group! Kudos on doing it so perfectly. I can't wait for the next one.

The only suggestion I have is to find a way to even out the voice volume.

There's the funny thing..

Below me is some person called J05H-DA who used numbers in his name which was actually first used by Japanese teenagers...ironic fact number one. Number two is this same person has absolutely nothing on his page of any value. Three is the fact that he/it is commenting on a flash, a.k.a. a cartoon (persay) say seems to believe that it should adhere to real-world events. Yet here is the generic bully #1 on Newgrounds commenting on a flash when, if he doesn't like 'wapanese' then shouldn't have watched it in the first place. Is it just me or is there a crap load of irony here?

But don't you worry (here let me help) Josh, I'll hate you for being you and I expect I am not the only one :D. Now you go back to getting your C's in school and take a job as a janitor at said school, nothing like getting paid by the same district that you nearly flunked at. That or as was once said go play on a freeway.

On to the actual tiny review.

I'll make this short and sweet, once again I'll say that your movement animations need some work, the actually animation of the characters aren't bad, just some parts could use some 1. smoothing out or 2. different move sets. It still has the feel of your classic WHOOKOS and that generally isn't a bad thing. Keep it up.

~Tony

O_O

nice voice acting. lolz wow hawt design for girl. i feel envious lolz anyways i love your flash! wewt!

Hokay...

You've got a brilliant idea here with the WHOOKOS set but I feel as if it needs some refining. The brilliant thing here is the idea of what school would be like if you could handle bullies like that, if you could skip class like that and if you could have been as awesome like that. But it's the execution that I felt that let you down.
1) The voice acting needed some extra LIFE in it. Thats not to say it aint good, it just needs to be more exciting like (please excuse me) Rina Chan or even Egoraptor. If you could get the voices right then it would be well on the way to being brilliant
2) Next is the storyline. It was a good concept but felt like it trudged along whining "do we HAVE TO" . Don't make me feel like I have to force myself to watch the whole thing.

Okay that was the bad. NOW TO THE GOOD!
1) The jokes were well done and were well refined. I actually lol'd many times. Instead of the "hur dur DICK ASS" kind of jokes of many other artists, you passed these on your 'joke motorbike' screaming FUCK YOU and then throwing several witty remarks from an air cannon bought from a shady character across the road.
2) Good animation. 'Nuff said

WELL DONE. Lets see if the next few are even better that this one!