Reviews for WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 3

[mcnally86]

sorry

My unbiased opinion is that this is decent animation but the levels on the voices need balancing. Some are low some are high. Also maybe add some background noise or something more often. Most of the movie I could hear the gaps when audio tracks kicked on or off. I mean to say it was dead silence, because nothing was recorded to that space of video, then I heard a mic open up transmitting background pink noise and I knew something was about to say something before they did. Its a bit unsettling to make your viewers have forced precognition because they know a character will speak before they open their mouth.

My biased opinion is that all the characters in your movie should fall down a hole and die. Except teacher McBald. These people are horrible people.

[Spazkid]

school.

The voices were the worst part of this flash including newcomer to the whookos crew druox who I am most defiantly hopping will be in everything new whookos related. BBs voice Blew up almost every time in my ear and half the time kyo sounded like he was talking from the other room some were loud, some were quiet some were late.

As for the story the whole beating the bullys bid did everything but make me cheer you on. im sure in reality if Someone like Rat was to intimidate that guy, he wouldnt flinch hed probably break his legs and make him walk on his hands. Stop trying to do this tuff guy attitude and act like the weak down to earth weaboos you are.

And for druox, maybe get a role that doesnt involve a jack black sound alike.
I'm sick of only hearing yelling come out of his mouth. And change the scenery up a bit that bid with you a swiffer talking over how addicted to happy juice you are or something stupid like that. All i saw was a pan out of the school Same school picture all the way back from 2008 in a 2010 flash. Im sorry but thats lazyness.

and if there was any form of humor in this it was either sufficated by childish immaturity and bad mic reception.

[teejay-number13]

Boring...

I missed the part where this was supposed to be funny. Or even entertaining.

[Bunnymajs]

meh

Front paged and all, i had some expectations..
But this has poor voice acting, stupid story and boring lines!
And whats up with the names?
Well.. whatever, this is bad and i dont understand how i got those scores.

[Abnorvell]

Boring

One big thing I didn't understand was that they're afraid of getting caught sneaking off to get soda, but completely unafraid to suffocate someone, use a middle school girl to seduce a teacher, AND kick him through a wall. The teacher in another class tells the red-haired kid not to drink in the room, but then lets him anyway because... well, just because. I didn't see any point in that.

The writing was stale with droning voices, honestly. Neither would be big issues if you at least added some kind of content beyond a couple kids wanting soda. You want these characters to have, well... character, but none of them have flaws or defining attributes and never reach threatening impasses.

Maybe I'm piecing it apart, but given everything, your animation is getting better.

Also, the cuts to the outside view of the school really threw me off. They were during conversations between the characters; did you just not want to animate that? It would be a decent ending transition, but you used it a couple times.