sound
fix the audio sync
Reviews for "A Fistful Of Fuzzies"
What is this bar even for anyways?
Now that im on the RIGHT bar, that was great. Very typical kind of "troublemaker-in-the-bar" type western cenario. Senario? whichever one is right. Anyways your animation was alright but alot of it could have been smoother. Great artwork, effects, and story. Overall with a few improvements to the animation itself could be a top scoring contender! Grats and continue on!
4/5
8/10
Very fun to watch
Although the art was rough and the voices occasionally odd, this was fun to watch, with absolutely perfect pacing, decent sound usage, and a good level of awareness; you're not playing this short up for more than it's worth. Glad to have seen this
KFoxyFox responds:
Thanks :) Just done for a bit of fun really ^^
thought it was ok
like you said, the lip syncing didn't quite match up, but I also felt that the voices didn't have enough emotion in them.
the story was brief and lacked depth (no reason as to why they were going into the depth of the west, nor do we find out who these people are (is the main char supposed to be some sort of sheriff type or is he supposed to be a do-gooder badass) )
the title sequence was very good, although i felt that the intro after that should provide the story depth and character build that would have boosted your score (it doesn't even have to be a long intro, maybe a quick miss-understanding at a bank which lead them to be driven out of town and to run away from the law etc)
the animation was a little choppy, but it doesn't draw attention to itself.
I noticed the faint attempt at comedy, but it could have been a little more than not-so-funny one-liners. also why the pictures and maps of Aussie land everywhere lol? the wild west is in America. and I'm pretty sure Australia doesn't have coyotes
the atmosphere you whipped up was pretty nice and the art was superb.
overall 8/10 5/5. i enjoyed the most part and would like to see an improvement on this.
KFoxyFox responds:
Thanks :) The Australia thing is a homage to Australian westerns; I got the idea since two of the voices were provided by Australians. Gold was mined in Australia, so there is more in common with the American west thank some may be led to think ;)
The main character was meant to be a bit of a prat anyway =P I made this to fulfil a script I wrote at uni, which ironically got a great grade :) Thanks again for the feedback!
Love your work, it's funnier n' hell.