Reviews for The New Suited (pilot)

[PeteGrammarman]

It was very well done, but not very original.

I really liked the look of it, you put a ton of work into this and it shows. The overall presentation is outstanding.

My problems were with the writing and the concept. It was just Get Smart without the clever jokes and a ton more pop culture references. The characters are so bland and uninteresting it was difficult to watch at points. You could work on branching them out a bit so that they differ from the standard archetypes you put them in. After all, this is just a pilot and the characters haven't had a chance to develop. Some of the non-pop-culture jokes were good, but most were just boring.

You've definitely presented the show well, visually. And it is no good to see all this hard work go to waste on boring characters(which could easily be improved in following episodes) and unfunny jokes. Also I liked the music.

[Norstat]

Feels recycled

Just like scary movie. It's harder than people think cramming a bunch of other peoples content into ones own work. Seems like it was just reused popular references. The animation and audio was pretty well worked.

[ollie12345]

Oh my

Even during the title i had worked out the synopsis i think someone mentioned bellow me, the old incompetent Hero and capable sidekick cliche, Inspector Gadget is a really good example and did the genre really well, this just doesn't really appeal :/ you can do a lot better.....

On the other hand the Animation was excellent, professional work and the audio and voice was pretty spot on even if the main characters voice was somewhat annoying. The humour had potential but relying on stuff like IMA FIRIN MA LAZOR!! just felt like you where trying to guarantee laughs and it felt a bit out of place.

Hope you dont think im being harsh for the sake of it, its all purely constructive i assure you :)

[SuNiKuSu]

Who are you trying to appeal to?

The jokes didn't work for me guys. The animation is very well done and professional, but you need to brush up on your jokes-- are you trying to appeal to the internet or to a set audience?

[LIFEinLOVE]

was sort of bland

i like the art and everything is pretty well done, but the humor is a little to dry for me. The art is pretty good now just work alittle bit on the writing.