Very well done!
Seems like you have very concrete characters and ideas for the series, and it shows. The characters and the way they behave seem persistent.
I liked the background and the overall art style, it looks good.
I wouldn't say the writing was laugh-out-loud funny but I was smiling and chuckling throughout the whole animation, but that probably has something to do with it being a pilot, pilots are difficult.
Good luck, I'm interested in seeing more.