great battle. piggy got the first easy, think the second was a draw.
vote:pigpen
Reviews for "Clab - Pigpen Vs Vinstigator"
Just wanted to point out that Descrated Sentinel just signed up today (July 6th) but yet he knows about PiGPRN's flashes? Obviously an alt account. Oh and to the people having a hard time keeping up woth what I said in my first verse it was
"never show your face bitch you're uglier than Steve Buscemi, so you have stupid bootleg Kefka rockin' a bikini" a reference to his Kefka-looking avatar he uses on the forums.
Anyway, thanks to the people who actually provided constuctive critism and not just 1 word reviews.
I'm too tired to make a full on review like I have before, so to get to the point:
PiGPEN
> Made good use of disses
> Lyrics seemed too "choppy" to me
Vinstigator
> Had a good lyrical flow
> Lacked many comebacks
Vote: Vinstigator
1st
-oh those Fat jokes hilarious, specially the frito lay one, but even if starting can be difficult he should add some variation to it.
-Steve Bashimi, ouch man that IS calling some one ugly specially on its later years.
2nd
-fat jokes again? well at least the headset diss was there. Nintendo disses are cool though...
-coach advice, beat drop uses, you actually messed with his animation?
so i will go with vinstigator, because really, vinstigator also makes flashes and there was no reference to that... pigpen could have added that to the fat jokes repertory, but he didn't, and repetition has a cost here.
Got asked to drop a vote on this, and after a few listens, I can't come up with a winner. I'm sorry. So here's some of my impressions that led me to that conclusion.
Pigpen: Pigpen has a slow lazy flow, and that's not necessarily something I'm going to punish him for. it's his style. It's casual and smooth and I don't have a problem with it. He switches up his cadence a good amount and is substantially more entertaining than most from his presentation alone. The problem in this battle was definitely his motivation. The fat punches went long, but they were clever. The flips were clever.
Vinstigator: Basically, Vince's strengths were Pigpen's weaknesses, but vice versa as well. Vinstigator has a solid flow and rode the beat well and put some genuine emotion into his delivery. The punches need to be more creative. I appreciate and give credit to all the rebuttal attempts, but they need to be more clever than just, "fat jokes were weak". Use some wordplay and your content will really be solid.
That being said, Pigpen wins on content, but Vince was punching more. Vince wins on flow, but Pigpen varied cadence more. I'm stumped.