Stunning
Wow. The artwork is great, although the quality isn't so good (its quite blurry). Simple yet impressive concept too.
Reviews for "Duality Complete"
Weenog responds:
thank you, yeah i think its a shame about the blurryness to, especialy in the first scene, ALOT of tiny little buildings and trees i drew have simply turned into clusters of pixels when i converted the file to flash.
Quality could be better....
and it could be a bit longer but anyway its masterpiece :)
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Truly Experimental
What made this little slice of animation breathtaking was the sheer epicness of having the entire thing pencil drawn, which makes it stand apart from practically every animation on this site. Also the stark contrasts between the pure clarity of nature and the voluminous dark of technology were plain cool.
Weenog responds:
thanks dude ^^
nice!
this is ur first flash? congrate! im more of a story person, but as art this is pretty damn good. keep going dude. keep going. :P
Shame it wasn't longer
Ah, a nice refreshing piece to view after such a melancholy day. I love the way that you've constructed this world and have given both sides of the piece an avatar of some kind, to give some sort of personality to the metaphors of Machina and Natural effectively living at odds with one another.
The pencil sketched piece was great for the portrayal, but the video quality did let it down a little - not necessarily your fault, perhaps something to do with the conversion software or compression. Perhaps you need to ask Tom for a bigger allowance to upload these files to Newgrounds? Going over 10 meg would give you better quality and allow you to really push the boundaries with pieces like this.
I really would love to see if this story leads somewhere, as I do feel strangely unfulfilled by watching this piece, as if it is leading into something bigger...
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Weenog responds:
Thanks for the review, Like you said it's the conversion software that made it all pixelish. But you can check my profile for a youtube link if you like. I should familiarise myself somemore with flash in order to make larger movies and do something about that quality and lack of preloader, and i will...in time ^^