Reviews for SpeedE The WFD

[Coop]

Meh

Sorry, but what was this I just watched? I know that you're trying to say the "Worlds Fastest Drummer", but quite frankly, Lars Ulrich can drum faster than the drumming you used on this piece.

The animation was good, but it's not like the title seems to reflect what actually happens within the piece itself. More work is required to flesh that out, since the piece was just too short for my liking. With how you've got it working at the moment, just try throwing a few bits and pieces in there, like actually playing drums, for example. I can play air drums and I'd even say I've graduated enough to play them by tapping my hands against a steering wheel or something similar.

You have plenty of uses for this superpower, so perhaps give us more scenarios where the World's fastest drummer would be able to help him fight injustice. There is potential, but it needs to be expanded upon first. The animation style is the best thing about it, so developing that will help you so much here.

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McAfee-Enterprises responds:

Coop83, great points! It may have helped some if we had not just thrown SpeedE The WFD out to the world without some mention that he was originally a character that grew from the whole X-Sport called Extreme Sport Drumming and World's Fastest Drummer movement........It may or may not.......?

Thanks for the encouragement on the potential side and we hope we can come up with some more scenarios that utilize SpeedE The WFD's superpowers!

Any writers needing a fun project?

Again thanks so much to all who have taken the time to make such valuable suggestions.........

M-E

[Celx-Requin]

Inconsistent drawing but I admire the effort.

Hello,

I like that you submitted something other than a stick movie as your first submission.

The drawings were solid, although at times a little off, and disproportionate.
The animation was mediocre in comparison to other submissions, and sadly quite choppy.

The voice acting was well done, and the sound effects were well selected.

My main gripe with the cartoon was the story, it didn't really make sense to me... Why did he turn into a super hero drummer? it was random and out of place.
The submission was also terribly short.

I was considering giving you a seven, since it is a very good first submission, however pragmatically when I think about it it wouldn't be the right thing to do.

I do think you show immense potential, and you should continue to produce content!

Sincerely,
- Celx
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McAfee-Enterprises responds:

Celix, thanks fro your input! With the success we have recently had with SpeedE in WFD The Game, Worlds Fastest Gamer and especially all the awesome suggestions here at Newgrounds, we are very inspired and exciting about the possibility to do a longer more involved episode of SpeedE......

I agree with your comments and we really do need someone in the creative story writing area............. Once you try to beat him in WFD The Game he makes a little more since possibly but yea we do need to build more storyline to why he transforms and more siuations etc........HELP!!!!!! :)