from good to bad
at the start i thought this was gonna be a decent animation, dont get me wrong, it still pretty much is, but did u get lazy after the guys came out of the car or something?
Reviews for "SpeedE The WFD"
McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Thanks for your honest input..... Did it seem like it dragged a little on the end?
its ok
had some cheesy one liners, but not too bad
McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Thanks! :)
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The movie was pretty good, the animation and the graphics are very smooth, the WFD is very well drawed, such as the whole other characters...
The voices are awesome, too, I think it really fitted with the characters personality, but the bad things are that the artwork seems to be very bad sometimes, their walk is very weird, and I think that this thing really messed up w/ the whole animation...
I just think that the animation is very good, but you can improve it, you have potential to make evemn better things, your work would be awesome... Keep it up w/ the good work!!!
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Roger
Hmm
The graphics look nice, even though there where some flaws sometimes (at one point the outer line of Stanleys right elbow is missing, for example) but it's nice to look at anyway.
The animations could be a bit more fluent, but they where okay as well.
The voice acting was pretty good, even though the sound quality was a bit low. Also one of the characters that tried to bully Stanley had some static sounds on his voice, propably a bad mic, but it's annoying nevertheless.
As far as the story goes this flash is a bit confusing. Since when has the world's fastest drummer nunchucks?
Anyway, overall it's an okay flash.
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McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Haggard, good points and we hope to correct some of those amateurish mistakes in our next one.......We really need some help in accomplishing many of these awesome suggestions so if you know of anyone up for a challenge please send them SpeedE's way.......
For those that don't know SpeedE started as a character in WFD The Game as seen at Worlds Fastest Gamer
Again thanks for the awesome ideas, input and help wanted for sure (writers, animators etc) in fleshing our little SpeedE! :)
Review Request Club
For a first submission, this shows a lot of promise. But at the same time, a lot of room for improvement.
The graphics in general were a little flawed at parts; during the fight scene the jock with the sleeveless jumper loses the shoulder strap, and the WFD guy loses the outline to his elbow. At the start, the background also looked somehow under-drawn, and the band-leader guy kind of jumped from being vaguely far away from Stanley to right next to him. Just a little flaw, but something that could be fixed with a second look.
The lip-sync was okay, but at the points where you had the close-up of anyone's face it was obvious that it was a little static on the animation side. However, the voices themselves were pretty good and the music/sound effects worked well...although the drums in the music you chose weren't exactly fast.
The animation again, was alright, but could have done with some improvement; when the jock does the chicken movement you can see the outline of his body stick out from his arms (Don't know how else to describe, sorry), and the nunchucks were very artificial for a weapon that's meant to be very fluid and dynamic.
In general, this has promise. I think as a first flash to NG this is better than most, but as has been said, there's places to improve. When you make another one, try and make the episode a little longer so the storyline's a little more fleshed out, and you could have yourself the making of a pretty good series; keep it up.
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McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Hey Animith, thanks so much for your review and comments etc....I felt they were right and we hope to be able to do many of the things you suggested......The make it longer seems to be a common comment and I agree fully and again we really hope to in the next SpeedE episode.........For some background SpeedE started as the main character in level 5 of WFD The Game as seen and played at Worlds Fastest Gamer
Well after Addicting Games picked the game up WFD The Game produced well over 1.5 million plays in it's first 90 days and from those plays and the internet etc SpeedE started to take some legs and walk around.....:) So this is his first few steps if you will......
We really hope to make SpeedE into a series and do welcome any input or collaborative efforts/suggestion from any of you guys here on Newgrounds.......Again thanks so much and if anyone wants to help SpeedE takes a few more steps please let us know.......????