Great animations
That was hilarious, and superbly animated. Your name sounds familiar, did you post at the sfdt forums?
Reviews for "SpeedE The WFD"
McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Thanks so much, it means a lot to us! :) What is sfdt forums ? I may have, your name looks familiar also...........
Again thanks so much!
Right on!
I like it :)
McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Thank you so much! I have seen your name around before so thanks a bunch for taking the time in viewing, posting and your input is much apreciated........
Very good detail and animation
This started of great and love the full animation of the characters with awsome and smooth animation, i think it needs some subtitles though and possibly a replay button at the end
My advice to improve on this is explained just above.
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McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Awesome input! Thanks and coming from you it means a lot for us. I was checking out some of yoru work and read the interview you did here at NG really cool stuff! :)
Again thanks for taking the time to give us some constructive input.........
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~ Animation ~
The animation was pretty good for the most part. I feel that you did a good job with syncing things such as the lip movement and body movements. Something that I think could have been worked on were the faster animations such as the car pulling up or when he swung his weapon. It seemed very slow and needs to be animated (the only words that I can think of) in a more forceful and swift manner.
~ Graphics ~
Just like the animation the graphics as a whole were rather good. I think there was only a couple of things that I noticed. The first thing was I really didn't like the black fade that you used. It wasn't a very appropriate place to use it and it would have looked much better if you would have cut to the next part. The second thing was when the character put his arms up to protect himself (before he transformed) you could see an odd area on his elbows where the outline disappears.
~ Story/Content ~
This is something that would make a very interesting series in my opinion. The average day regular guy who gets picked on by the jocks, but has special powers. The idea might not seem original, but the World's Fastest Drummer super power seems to be a very original way to approach this theme.
This was a good introduction flash to what would be a good series. In future episodes I would like to see more character development, more story line, and much more length in the submission. Probably somewhere around 3X as much content as what you had in this one. It should be fairly easy to meet the MB upload limit while having about 3X as much material in your story. (6.6 MBs)
~ Audio ~
If people aren't paying attention then this submission should sound very true to life. You did a great job with the ambient background noises of animals and things like that. The other sound effects like the car opening up sounded really good as well.
The voice acting was pretty good and I don't have any problem with the acting itself, but the quality of the sound was kind of low. It sounds like you used MP3 files? I'm personally a fan of having the high quality sound even if it means increasing my file size. The voices take a hit from quality and it kind of takes my rating down a little bit. Better quality voices would have made this much better.
~ Overall ~
Very few things wrong with the animation and graphics, you set this up for a good series if you wanted to continue, and the audio was really good except for the quality of the voices.
I hope this review has helped you, that you continue to work and produce flashes, and that you come back to the Review Request Club whenever you submit a flash again.
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McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Fro, you are so right on! Thanks for your time in this review. We would love to do a SpeedE The WFD series and through so much encouragement from NG reviews, we are inspired to do so.......If you didn't know already and I think most here didn't which gave us some very honest reviews is that SpeedE The WFD grew from WFD The Game, did ya know that? He's the last have to beat character and hardest level as seen at World's Fastest Gamer............
If you know of any talented writers and creative folk we would love to explore how to get SpeedE to a series if you honestly feel there's merit?
from good to bad
at the start i thought this was gonna be a decent animation, dont get me wrong, it still pretty much is, but did u get lazy after the guys came out of the car or something?
McAfee-Enterprises responds:
Thanks for your honest input..... Did it seem like it dragged a little on the end?