Remeber kids
never get to drunk in Vegas or a hooker will cut out your kidneys
Remeber kids
never get to drunk in Vegas or a hooker will cut out your kidneys
smooth
but some of what you put on ones looked really jumpy on your close ups. when working in traditional animation, it's good to stick to 24 fps unless your gonna do something that disney would do, otherwise you get that jumpy effect i referred to. other than that, it was cool. your characters were original and simple, and you also had a story. one gripe though is you had very little actual animation. when your character walked, he had tiny legs. these are good shortcuts, but if you do something like that, give him something else to keep the audience focused on so theres not a lack of action on screen.
Nice
I wouldn't call it Hertzfeldtian, but I could see that you had the basic astheics in play. It was nice, and I hope to see more from you in this style. You obviously have the talent.
I don't get it
wut's the plan but nice though
just ONE issue
wHY do the ummmmmm, errr, eye things want his kidney? and wtf is with the death lazer?