Ooh!
'follow me...................................
..................... okay' that part was brilliant XD. The rest of the movie was okay, pretty good music too.
Ooh!
'follow me...................................
..................... okay' that part was brilliant XD. The rest of the movie was okay, pretty good music too.
nice
well, I was going to ask if you intended to look Don Hertzfeldt-y, and then I read your description. Haha.
I think you captured his look, but not his style. Your animation also appeared sort of awkward at points (example spinning room, when the roots grab him, etc.)
Good job, but I think you have potential to put together a better story.
huh?
I don't get it. Its not that I wasn't paying attention, or that im not familiar with plot twists... I really just don't get it at all. I guess your just going for a purely creepy atmosphere, you nailed that part. Confusion may follow ... Im suddenly craving twinkies.. I don't like twinkies.
A few notes.
I don't think you captured Hertzfeldt's style, especially as he hand draws everything, as opposed to doing an overlay over a loop of creased paper. It gives his characters a shifting quality which your work didn't quite duplicate. The choice of subtitles also took a lot away, hand draw letters would have been better. The story was also a bit weak, and the main character wasn't anything special, visually, or, well, as a character.
Otherwise, though, it was pretty good. The eye-bots were well designed, the scene with the door was well executed, especially the boxes being moved around. Overall, a fairly decent animation.
Rather disturbing
The animation is nice, the background music fits perfectly.. All in all it's a nice composition. But i dont understand, is it supposed to be so deviant, yet simple, or does it have some deeper meaning than some aliens gathering human organs for the black market or so..?