Looks promising.
I admire an artist who sets a different pace towards their animations.
Plenty of symbolism to explore (though, I feel it has to do more than just with age and experience) Anyways, the animation is clean and simple. The drawings are rather basic; however, the view of the horizon was spectacular, innovative thinking or not, I enjoyed the sight of the sunset.
Effort was definitly put into this (and don't worry about it being NG material- you got Frontpaged though XD)
I wish you the best of luck! You definitly have potential being an animator.
-ChaosWolfGod