pretty good
was basically a pretty good flash, just need to work on voice acting. At some times it was a bit lackluster, or awkwardly paced, but you got funny ideas and good animation. Just work on confidence in recording voices, and having them fow more naturally. You're definitely better than 95% of the stuff on newgrounds anyway, keep it up!
Agreed. Some of the voice acting in this wasn't the best (I'd use the word stiff), but I was under a bit of a time restraint and tried to cover it. I'm working on the pacing, it's not easy though. Thanks for the tips, I'll definitely keep them in mind next time I'm recording voices. It's all a learning process.
well
hmm it could be more dramatic but still good hmm u know the voices wasnt too good but what the hell . I gota give u some credit for the works innit :)
I wasn't exactly aiming for drama, more of a laid back comedy. I guess I'll have to work on the voices though...
Haha awesoem!
The voice acting reallllly sucked but the animation and jokes were pretty funny.
I liked it !
I'm glad!
Well...
The animation is good. But the voices sometimes wen't easy to understand... (Maybe i think so because english isn't my mother tongue...) The storyline wasn't that interesting - 7 for the good animation
I'm glad that you at least liked the animation!
Keep working at it
For the most part it was as bad as some people are making it to be. I didn't think it was to hard to follow, and unlike the post a few down from this newgrounds normally doesn't go for the realistic approach... You main problem was the voice acting and the mic.
All of the people just sounded bored when they talked... And the mic you were using didn't do it any justice.
I think it was a little funny and was for the most part entertaining... so you get a 7 but this isn't front page worthy...
Fair enough. Thank you for your honesty!