Yes, and no
This deserves a almost respectable score, sence it does have all the basic tools needed to make a game. There was music, graphics, a story(?), and a objective. None of which were by any means thrilling, but were infact there.
Some key things to remember when making a game with a specific goal in mind
-Make sure the game is well grounded to this goal. Make sure your point is well known. (This game had nothing to do with helping kids in hospitals)
-Don't over-do your description. (Most people are lazy and it will just go unread)
-Spice things up. Keep the player guessing what's going to happen next. (Some of the backgrounds and dialog were entertaining but wished there was more of it)
If you actualy read this, I hope what little I know about flash making helps.