i saw her
yeah i saw her with a black tongue tied round the roses.
fist pounding on the vending machine.
torrid diamond ring stuck on her finger.
at least the game works. killed some time. +1 for beck.
Reviews for "Seven's Second Adventure"
Magical-Zorse responds:
oh yea
Nice art, but doesn't feel like a game
I have no problem with 8-bit graphics at all. I can tell that there was some genuine effort to fill each of the screens with detail and color, not like some unfinished work with tons of white backgrounds.
However, this was an elaborate fetch quest-not the most exciting of games, but one I decided to complete, mainly because I wanted to see what each of the people had to say after delivering the items.
What I did have a problem with was that it took so long to get between places. Sure, I kinda enjoyed the various locales, but again and again? Slow walking isn't necessarily a problem in games unless it involves tons of backtracking, in which case, it bogs down the experience.
I can see two options to solve it. Option 1 would be to either have a feature to open up an area map (the entire area can easily be transposed into a grid layout, for instance) so that you can simply click one of the areas and jump there. Option 2 is simpler if you don't really feel like making a fast-travel map option-employ clickable arrows on the sides of the screens to rapidly transfer between locations (maybe you could limit this kind of fast travel to places you've already walked to before.)
Also, I found that you can mute the music in the game, but not unmute it.
Overall, though, it didn't really feel like a game at all. It was all mindless wandering back and forth, with no conflict, challenges, minigames or whatnot. But anyway, I think it's cool that you're donating the ad proceeds to charity, something that some people refuse to accept, so I felt it was worth just checking out.
Magical-Zorse responds:
cool review
Hmm
Good game but like other had said it need more interactivity than just going round and talking to people e.g. be able to actually talk to them instead of just walk past with the correct item and they talk to you maybe put in some obstacles, e.g. some you can't get past to you give them the specific item, and items hidden, I don't know
behind a bush or something, and for it to say something when you found that item, e.g. "you found a gold key!" also one more thing if possible can we go indoors? instead of just left right left right left , get a bit tedious after a while.
Keep working on those games and you might make an more epic game than this one. Nice work!
Magical-Zorse responds:
It got medals and frontpage. I'd say it's pretty epic
alright
good game....... but weird story line.
Funny, good time waster
The character could have moved a little faster though.
I like how all the images are poor quality except the puzzle piece and CD, lol.