Hmmmmm...
It has a good story and is pretty well animated, but the audio sucks. Sorry.
Hmmmmm...
It has a good story and is pretty well animated, but the audio sucks. Sorry.
quite enjoyable
i like the animation and story but the narration i felt you were trying to give a quick and ominous atmosphere with it but forced the sentences to rhyme the way you said it and it sounded dregged and took away some quality from the narration, however it is a great animation which you should be proud of, and it really is a slightly minor detail from an otherwise great submission.
mad props
Thanks very much!
Love it! 5/5
Very enjoyable. Thanks a lot for this submission. I'm sure other users have made you aware of the audio problems with it. I also felt the narrator was rushing on some bits.But other than that I cannot find any other issues with the video.
Thanks again. :)
No problem. =]
Poetic
Great poem and some parts of the flash are put together good.
Thanks!
nice
i loved the way the story was narrated