nice!
i agree with poison green, it was whispered and too fast... i think if ya do it putting more pauses, more volume in some parts, it would be real nice
but i loved the animation style ^^
n the story ^^
nice!
i agree with poison green, it was whispered and too fast... i think if ya do it putting more pauses, more volume in some parts, it would be real nice
but i loved the animation style ^^
n the story ^^
Thanks very much!
Nice
Animation and poem are tops, but I think that a more sinister narration would do good.
weird?
kinda creepy. i liked the poem, but i felt that the animation didnt match the mood of it. the piano did add to the eerie sensation i felt, but only just slightley.
Good flash
This flash needs a deep voice not a child's one, you need someone with that voice, you have to understand that horror poetry need to be recited with a very low and clear voice.
Apart from that Yann Tiersen's tune is perfect, the drawing is good enought, and the animation perfect.
Very well done, but had flaws.
I liked the poem by it's own, and the animation was fair, but the voice acting was not that well done. Of course, you cant change that unless you get a new actor. Otherwise, I thought it was pretty good. But as I stated, the poem itself was top notch.
Thank you.