awesomeness
the animation was awesome! I thought the voiceacting was pretty great too, the only problem I saw with it was that it seemed a bit speedy. if the dialogue was slowed down a bit, it would have been absoloutly perfect!
awesomeness
the animation was awesome! I thought the voiceacting was pretty great too, the only problem I saw with it was that it seemed a bit speedy. if the dialogue was slowed down a bit, it would have been absoloutly perfect!
lost and found
i watched this a long time ago, in some way i just couldn't find it again. It's a great poem and the music fits so well. I cannot give you top score because of the mic though. Maybe another recording of the audio would be in it's place.
Do you have any other similar poems?
i liked it
but ...damn this music...i think its really annoing,because i heard it in many movies and flash movie. come on...but animation is really good
Really? What other movies is it in? It certainly isn't off the Audio Portal.
quite enjoyable
i like the animation and story but the narration i felt you were trying to give a quick and ominous atmosphere with it but forced the sentences to rhyme the way you said it and it sounded dregged and took away some quality from the narration, however it is a great animation which you should be proud of, and it really is a slightly minor detail from an otherwise great submission.
mad props
Thanks very much!
Poetic
Great poem and some parts of the flash are put together good.
Thanks!